Day 9 ~ Item 6: Partial Critique

From author Monica Bustamente Wagner:

"Manuscript Critique: First 10 pages

I’m a YA writer represented by Michelle Wolfson of Wolfson Lit.  And I’ll critique the first 10 pages of a manuscript—any genre, though I’m better betaing YA novels and women’s fiction.
The critique includes thorough line-by-line comments (sentence structure, grammar, repetitive words, etc) and overall suggestions (characterization, pacing, etc).

I would love to critique 20 pages if the bidding goes over $30."