From Saundra Mitchell, author of Shadowed Summer and The Verspertine:
"Two (2) critiques for the first 10 pages of a YA or MG novel or novella. I'll provide general picture notes, and line-edits where appropriate. Any genre, any topic. Jackson Pearce will vouch for me. (Or warn you away.) In any case, my red pen is ready and waiting for the top two bidders on this auction."